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Categories Literature > Prose > Fiction > Life Stories


She was found trying to blink away images of a destroyed home from her memory.

Every time she closed her eyes, there was fire, eating up the doors, making it harder to breathe, trapping her with the screams of her dying family.
When she opened them, she saw the same grey rain and white lightning that set her home ablaze.

But finally, something blocked the lightning from her sight.
The something was holding out a box of strawberry flavored Pocky.
She looked up to see a smile under an umbrella.

“You look like you need a bite”
And that was the start of a lifelong addiction.
©2008 ~kakashiplushie
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Haha, yeah...I was really bored XD

Well, actually this was for a 'Make-Your-Own-Character' contest on another site that I was helping my friend with but I figured this version was too Creative-Writing-y XD And since I feel so effin proud of it, I put it here :D

This was originally meant to be one really long paragraph but come on, who wants to read something like that? ^^

Love Pocky Love Life :headbang:

-if anyone has a better title suggestion, I would really appreciate it XD-

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~themagnetichippo:iconthemagnetichippo: May 12, 2008, 3:35:29 AM
cute shaniqua ><

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regret as i could, i can never be the one who will make you happy. i can never be the one to hold you tight. i can never be the one who will kiss you good night and stay in your dreams... never will i be the girl you'd be willing to love.
~kakashiplushie:iconkakashiplushie: May 12, 2008, 11:28:38 PM
I was bored...As in REALLY bored XD Nyaha, thanks for the fave ^^

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You're inspiration is worth more than all the chocolate in the world.

-Wow, something that doesn't rhyme...but is still dedicated to Kakashi XD-
~themagnetichippo:iconthemagnetichippo: May 13, 2008, 10:42:27 PM
deserving naman :P

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regret as i could, i can never be the one who will make you happy. i can never be the one to hold you tight. i can never be the one who will kiss you good night and stay in your dreams... never will i be the girl you'd be willing to love.
~kakashiplushie:iconkakashiplushie: May 13, 2008, 11:23:26 PM
Yeah, sure, whatever you say XD

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You're inspiration is worth more than all the chocolate in the world.

-Wow, something that doesn't rhyme...but is still dedicated to Kakashi XD-
~themagnetichippo:iconthemagnetichippo: May 13, 2008, 11:59:50 PM
:P

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regret as i could, i can never be the one who will make you happy. i can never be the one to hold you tight. i can never be the one who will kiss you good night and stay in your dreams... never will i be the girl you'd be willing to love.
~milkberry-chocolate:iconmilkberry-chocolate: May 19, 2008, 9:40:12 AM
this is just splendid, haha I look like that something who was hlding the pocky box, you say why? Ilike giving 'em out to people I like xDD
:lmao: demn demn this is just great i like it! A LOT! <3

nd I still miss joo shani qua I just wished we could be classmates, but that's beyond impossible cause i can never reach the peak of sd and dd :lol: xD

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"By learning pain, you can become a person who can be kind to others"
~kakashiplushie:iconkakashiplushie: May 20, 2008, 7:56:10 PM
Nyaha, thanks for the fave and thanks so much for reading!! It's not me that makes it great...it's the presence of Pocky XD

Haha, if I had Pocky, I wouldn't even consider giving it out to anyone...yeah, maybe to people I like...but other than that...IT'S MINE!! I'm so selfish ><

:P Nya, SD and DD people aren't so high...well, maybe SD people but not DD people!! XD But seriously, please don't treat me any different...it would be too weird XD Haha, don't worry, by fourth year, they would all realize that I am not up to the sheer DD-ness of it all and make me normal again ^^

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You're inspiration is worth more than all the chocolate in the world.

-Wow, something that doesn't rhyme...but is still dedicated to Kakashi XD-
~VampiricBunny:iconVampiricBunny: May 22, 2008, 3:31:59 AM
I like pocky.. -asian ness-
This is beautiful, I like how it had changed so suddenly

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EetTheChildrenRaw.
~milkberry-chocolate:iconmilkberry-chocolate: May 22, 2008, 9:08:45 AM
you're welcome
yes pocky is the win hahaha, it's the main subject of course! <3

hahaha stand up to their expectations! you've got a nice future ahead, unlike me :faint: i mean i do have nice grades, but being DD is like insurance! insurance to get into your chosen college! demn! haha xD

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"By learning pain, you can become a person who can be kind to others"
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